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Abisoye's avatar

Reading this alone in my room and laugh like a crazy person. Humans are really something - albeit fictional.

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Treasure Okure's avatar

glad it made you smile

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Anita's avatar

On today's episode of fear lagos men💀💀 .

But the plot twist was crazyyy, I love it❤

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Treasure Okure's avatar

thank you!

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Morah's avatar

Why am I so pained at the plot twist😩😩 I was really rooting for her. Sigh😪,

men will stain your white fr🚶‍♀️🚶‍♀️

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Treasure Okure's avatar

always

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Miriam Onyemenam's avatar

I wasn’t ready for that twistttt😭

You’re so good!

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Treasure Okure's avatar

thank you!!

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Adeoluwa Bolarinwa's avatar

This was awesome. It was like watching a short clip of a movie.

I would love to see more.

Great work Treasure 🔥

I heard the music playing at South Socials btw 🌚.

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Treasure Okure's avatar

yayyyyy!

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Joan's avatar

The plot twist!! Never expected it.😂

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Treasure Okure's avatar

my dear, that's life o

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Ayomide Ifeoluwa's avatar

I absolutely enjoyed reading this. My heart just wasn't ready for the plot twist talmabout "Dotun and the kids." 😭

I look forward to reading more fiction stories from youuuu. Welldoneeee!

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Treasure Okure's avatar

thank you sooo much!

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Idara Peniel's avatar

Omggg no wayyy😭😭 I love this and i definitely was not really for the plot twist! I totally look forward to more fiction stories from you Tress 💋 this was hilarious lol

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Treasure Okure's avatar

thank you baby!

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Ayomide O.'s avatar

Lagos men💀💀

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Gift Ukay's avatar

I really love thisss. To think I’ve been getting mails from you for a while, and something changed about it since the last one. Glad I found you.

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Treasure Okure's avatar

this is sweet. this made me smile.

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Mela Winning's avatar

This is beautiful

I was not prepared for the plot twist.

I low-key hoped it would lead to her getting that smile when she served him breakfast(food not heartbreak😂) the next morning.

I've been reminded to fear men by the plot twist anyway.

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Treasure Okure's avatar

that would have been cute o

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SeunCaleb's avatar

Fear Lagos men 😮‍💨

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Treasure Okure's avatar

always

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Medeena's avatar

Totally love the story

No amount of shock can me drop that flask of catfish

All it needs is two cold bottles of Smirnoff ice and a few drops of tears ( my tears tho ) ...lol

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Treasure Okure's avatar

sorry sorry 😔😭🥺

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Uzonna's avatar

This was such an interesting read 😂

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MOYOSOREOLUWA PETER-AYEYE's avatar

I love it

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Sapph's avatar

'Maybe Dotun and the kids' were what again? 🤣🤣🤣

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